Thursday, October 27, 2011

Essay for Tijerina Outline- Prompt 2

Thesis: Selena Gomez is a hero because she helps charities, is a positive rolemodel, and she inspires people.


Topic sentence1: Selena Gomez is a hero because she helps charities.
 Supporting Details: Selena Gomez is an ambassador of UNICEF. She helps children who didn't have clean water, or who have a high chance of getting diseases due to living conditions.


Topic Sentence2: For many people, Selena Gomez is a positive rolemodel.
Supporting Details: Little kids who watch her on disney channel look up to her, and want to be like her.


Topic Sentence3: Finally, she is a hero because she inspires people.
Supporting Details: Her music inspires people all over the world. The lyrics are meaningful and inspire people everywhere to follow their dreams.



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